pretty cool :]
Cool concept, I think its got potential.
The vocals are pretty cool, I'd say you should eq them so you cut out 13kHz and above, and cut all the low mids so you get a filtered effect, then distort them slightly with some reverb.
I dont really do this genre, I used to be into hardstyle but this is more jumpstyle which Ive never listened to.
Your structures good, but I think you should add a bridge with a different melody to keep some interest.